I want to ask;
What are the first 3 question marks on your head while you enter into a store for the first time?
Is this sentence correct grammatically?
Isn't it clumsy or wordy? Is there a better way to say it?
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A Google Ngram (link) shows that "questions you (may/might) have" is more common than the idiomatic "questions on your mind" by at least an order of magnitude. And I think the former is more neutral and natural.
Below are two examples, showing how different phrasing leads to different answers. This first example uses "things you want to know" as another way to write this concept:
Now suppose you are creating a more focused (perhaps psychological) questionnaire, and you want people to provide questions that they believe might occur spontaneously upon entering a store:
It is a little clumsy, and you have a prepositional error ("in" not "on"). I would argue that it's better to have questions "on your mind" rather than "in your head". Also, is it "while" entering or "when" you enter. "While" describes the exact moment, while "when" is a little more general. "As" would also be a good option. Try this:
You could also consider replacing "first" with "top" or "most important", which better express the ordering of questions in terms of importance.