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I am havinghave the following constructionssentences.

  1. Decomposition of data into simple blocks are presented by (Lin, 2013).
  2. Lin (2013) illustrates that the data gaps can be manipulated with the symmetric constraints.

Decomposition of data into simple blocks are presented by Lin (2013).

Lin (2013) illustrates that the data gaps can be manipulated with the symmetric constraints.

canCan I combine them as follows?

Decomposition of data into simple blocks are presented by Lin (Lin, 20132013) and illustratesand illustrates that the data gaps can be manipulated with the symmetric constraints.

But iI am boutednot sure this is grammeticallygrammatically wrong, as the subject of 2ndsecond sentence is Lin but, not the decomposition. (iI think subject of 1stthe first sentence is decomposition of data). So)

So, how could thisshould I correct thidthis? I feel it should be ... and he illustrates that the ..."and he illustrates [that the …]."

joining sentences without the subject

I am having following constructions.

  1. Decomposition of data into simple blocks are presented by (Lin, 2013).
  2. Lin (2013) illustrates that the data gaps can be manipulated with the symmetric constraints.

can I combine them as

Decomposition of data into simple blocks are presented by (Lin, 2013) and illustrates that the data gaps can be manipulated with the symmetric constraints.

But i am bouted this is grammetically wrong as the subject of 2nd sentence is Lin but not the decomposition (i think subject of 1st sentence is decomposition of data). So, how could this correct thid? I feel it should be ... and he illustrates that the ...

Joining sentences without the subject

I have the following sentences.

Decomposition of data into simple blocks are presented by Lin (2013).

Lin (2013) illustrates that the data gaps can be manipulated with the symmetric constraints.

Can I combine them as follows?

Decomposition of data into simple blocks are presented by Lin (2013) and illustrates that the data gaps can be manipulated with the symmetric constraints.

I am not sure this is grammatically wrong, as the subject of second sentence is Lin, not the decomposition. (I think subject of the first sentence is decomposition of data.)

So, how should I correct this? I feel it should be "and he illustrates [that the …]."

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joining sentences without the subject

I am having following constructions.

  1. Decomposition of data into simple blocks are presented by (Lin, 2013).
  2. Lin (2013) illustrates that the data gaps can be manipulated with the symmetric constraints.

can I combine them as

Decomposition of data into simple blocks are presented by (Lin, 2013) and illustrates that the data gaps can be manipulated with the symmetric constraints.

But i am bouted this is grammetically wrong as the subject of 2nd sentence is Lin but not the decomposition (i think subject of 1st sentence is decomposition of data). So, how could this correct thid? I feel it should be ... and he illustrates that the ...