There's nothing wrong with the sentence. Here
I'll split the sentence into two parts,
- You must redeem your free Psychonauts key by 10AM.
- You must redeem your free Psychonauts key by September 30th, 2017!
Two distinctly clear sentences, no confusions whatsoever.
Now the usagetricky part is when both of 'by' can be interpreted as 'not later than' or to an extend, 'before' or 'on or before'them are combined and when the punctuation comes into play.
Note: You must redeem your free Psychonauts key by 10AM Pacific on Saturday, September 30th, 2017!
The comma (,) is what brings about the maximum confusion in interpretation, for many people.
Try readingTo bring about more clarity in the modified sentence and see if, I'll restructure it makes more sense.as:
Note: You must redeem your free Psychonauts key beforeby 10AM Pacific on Saturday, September 30th, 2017!
More examples:
Teacher: I would like you to submit your assignments by this Fridaywhich is a Saturday.
This means thatNow, what do I get from this sentence? September 30th, which is a Saturday, is the teacher expects everybodylast day to submit their work withinredeem the coming Fridayfree ticket, and I have to get it before 10AM, the very same day.
Note
An argument is bound There are many ways to arise onrestructure the inclusion of Friday insentence, but the above example. Thatoriginal sentence is a new question altogetherperfect.
Teacher: I would like you to submit your assignments on or before Friday.
This sentence has more clarity on the aspect that Friday is also included in the deadline.Try reading it out loud:
"You must redeem your free Psychonauts key by 10AM Pacific" Update(break)
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"on Saturday," “Within two days of the deadline”(break) also."September 30th, 2017!"