Timeline for Need help with restructuring a sentence
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| Aug 20, 2018 at 8:21 | vote | accept | AIQ | ||
| Aug 19, 2018 at 9:49 | comment | added | AIQ | @J.R. Right. I apologize if it seemed that way, but proof reading was not my intention. | |
| Aug 19, 2018 at 9:43 | comment | added | J.R.♦ | I feel like this amply answers the question, and does a good job of telling any learner a good way to solve the quandary, no matter which way the particular details go. @A.Ishtiaq - If you don't like the way "each" works in that sentence, I suggest you find a different verb than induce, but this is getting dangerously close to proofreading. | |
| Aug 19, 2018 at 9:34 | comment | added | AIQ | I should have clarified that, but your first prediction is correct. Each province had a unique system of their own. Is there a way to use "each" elsewhere in the sentence? Using "The war induced each provincial government" seems that the war very intentionally and specifically did something to each of those provinces. Where as it was a need that was felt by the leaders. Although it was never a joint effort, when some of the provinces did establish such offices, others fed off that and contributed. | |
| Aug 19, 2018 at 9:05 | history | edited | Jason Bassford | CC BY-SA 4.0 |
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| Aug 19, 2018 at 8:58 | history | answered | Jason Bassford | CC BY-SA 4.0 |