Timeline for He's 16 and she's 14.
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Jan 10, 2017 at 16:12 | history | edited | Jasper |
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S Feb 25, 2014 at 1:32 | history | suggested | Todd | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
Fixed grammar and spelling.
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Feb 24, 2014 at 5:52 | comment | added | Maulik V | Okay, another way - I have a brother and a sister aged 16 and 14 respectively. | |
Feb 23, 2014 at 2:55 | comment | added | Umeco | Thank you for the comments. Sorry, I know I was not clear enough. I didn't know how to write it. I was told that it's strange to say "He's 16 and she's 14" in parallel. He said I should say "I have a brother and a sister. The brother is 16 and the sister is 14." But it didn't sound right to me, but I couldn't explain it clearly. | |
Feb 23, 2014 at 2:20 | answer | added | Mari-Lou A | timeline score: 3 | |
Feb 23, 2014 at 1:30 | review | Close votes | |||
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Feb 23, 2014 at 1:16 | comment | added | FumbleFingers | As things stand, it's "unclear what you're asking". Can you explain why you think the first version might not be "natural"? For example, are you bothered that the (semantic) links between he/she and brother/sister might not be strong enough to justify the "backward reference"? | |
Feb 23, 2014 at 0:56 | comment | added | user230 | As Angela's comment (née answer) says, it's fine. He and she unambiguously refer back to brother and sister respectively. | |
Feb 22, 2014 at 23:58 | history | edited | J.R.♦ | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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Feb 22, 2014 at 23:28 | comment | added | Angela | Both of those sentences sound fine. | |
Feb 22, 2014 at 23:08 | history | asked | Umeco | CC BY-SA 3.0 |