Timeline for Is 'promise going fast and not stopping' gramatically incorrect?
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Oct 2, 2018 at 15:01 | comment | added | Lambie | I don't think yours is better written. I think the original text as posted by the OP is better. | |
Oct 2, 2018 at 14:57 | comment | added | Hyeonseo Yang | I may have to wait seeing others vote on your answers.. But thanks anyway. | |
Oct 2, 2018 at 14:48 | comment | added | Peter | "In keeping his self made promise to go fast and not stop" is not awkward, "In keeping his self made promise going fast and not stopping" is awkward. I think we are confusing the original sentence. I was using the OP's original sentence. | |
Oct 2, 2018 at 14:39 | comment | added | Peter | My Answer is that the original sentence itself is awkward, but "going fast and not stopping" is fine. Not sure how you got dropping the phrase from my Answer. | |
Oct 2, 2018 at 14:29 | vote | accept | Hyeonseo Yang | ||
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Oct 2, 2018 at 14:25 | history | answered | Peter | CC BY-SA 4.0 |