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Oct 2, 2018 at 15:01 comment added Lambie I don't think yours is better written. I think the original text as posted by the OP is better.
Oct 2, 2018 at 14:57 comment added Hyeonseo Yang I may have to wait seeing others vote on your answers.. But thanks anyway.
Oct 2, 2018 at 14:48 comment added Peter "In keeping his self made promise to go fast and not stop" is not awkward, "In keeping his self made promise going fast and not stopping" is awkward. I think we are confusing the original sentence. I was using the OP's original sentence.
Oct 2, 2018 at 14:39 comment added Peter My Answer is that the original sentence itself is awkward, but "going fast and not stopping" is fine. Not sure how you got dropping the phrase from my Answer.
Oct 2, 2018 at 14:29 vote accept Hyeonseo Yang
Oct 2, 2018 at 14:57
Oct 2, 2018 at 14:25 history answered Peter CC BY-SA 4.0