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Tyler James Young
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I believe the author is trying to say that the main character thought (without letting it be known to others, i.e., to himselfto herself) the following: “Unless you try to talk to guys, genius.”

This could be made clearer by writing it with quotation marks, like so:

"Unless you try to talk to guys, genius," he thought.

“Unless you try to talk to guys, genius,” I thought to myself.

I believe the author is trying to say that the main character thought (without letting it be known to others, i.e., to himself) the following:

"Unless you try to talk to guys, genius," he thought.

I believe the author is trying to say that the main character thought (without letting it be known to others, i.e., to herself) the following: “Unless you try to talk to guys, genius.”

This could be made clearer by writing it with quotation marks, like so:

“Unless you try to talk to guys, genius,” I thought to myself.

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Eric
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I believe the author is trying to say that the main character thought (without letting it be known to others, i.e., to himself) the following:

"Unless you try to talk to guys, genius," he thought.