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Problem in making a sentence Should I write {from that fittorment called "prison"} or {from the contextprison of torment}?

I was reading an article where I saw Frank, John and Anglin three friends were released from a prison after 3 years. They were tortured brutally everyday while in prison. After reading that article I was thinking if I could also get rid of my bad luck like they were freed from that painful life! Because,I I was comparing my misfortune or bad luck with a prison and I want to get rid of it. So, if I summarize the whole thing, can I say these sentences :

  1. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck"!

  2. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from the prison of torment , but will I ever be freed from this prison of bad luck !

  1. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck"!
  1. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from the prison of torment, but will I ever be freed from this prison of bad luck !

NB : Actually I want to make a sentence that fit the context.I I would be grateful if you could correct my mistakes and also tell me the natural way of saying those sentences.

Problem in making a sentence that fit the context

I was reading an article where I saw Frank, John and Anglin three friends were released from a prison after 3 years. They were tortured brutally everyday while in prison. After reading that article I was thinking if I could also get rid of my bad luck like they were freed from that painful life! Because,I was comparing my misfortune or bad luck with a prison and I want to get rid of it. So, if I summarize the whole thing, can I say these sentences :

  1. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck"!

  2. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from the prison of torment , but will I ever be freed from this prison of bad luck !

NB : Actually I want to make a sentence that fit the context.I would be grateful if you could correct my mistakes and also tell me the natural way of saying those sentences.

Should I write {from that torment called "prison"} or {from the prison of torment}?

I was reading an article where I saw Frank, John and Anglin three friends were released from a prison after 3 years. They were tortured brutally everyday while in prison. After reading that article I was thinking if I could also get rid of my bad luck like they were freed from that painful life! Because, I was comparing my misfortune or bad luck with a prison and I want to get rid of it. So, if I summarize the whole thing, can I say these sentences :

  1. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck"!
  1. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from the prison of torment, but will I ever be freed from this prison of bad luck !

NB : Actually I want to make a sentence that fit the context. I would be grateful if you could correct my mistakes and also tell me the natural way of saying those sentences.

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Problem in making a sentence that fit the context

I was reading an article where I saw Frank, John and Anglin three friends were released from a prison after 3 years. They were tortured brutally everyday while in prison. After reading that article I was thinking if I could also get rid of my bad luck like they were freed from that painful life! Because,I was comparing my misfortune or bad luck with a prison and I want to get rid of it. So, if I summarize the whole thing, can I say these sentences :

  1. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from that torment called "prison", but will I ever be released from this prison called "bad luck"!

  2. At last Frank, John and Anglin are released from the prison of torment , but will I ever be freed from this prison of bad luck !

NB : Actually I want to make a sentence that fit the context.I would be grateful if you could correct my mistakes and also tell me the natural way of saying those sentences.