Return to Question

I am writing a request and have drafted the last two sentences as follows.

I trust in god and his judgement, and I trust that virtue lies in his bestowal and his prevention, and that is what encouraged me to write to you. May it finds your support and leniency.

I am wondering if leniency is a good word to use in this context. My purpose is to politely and somewhat deferentially appeal to the recipient's kindness, compassion, moral sense, etc.

This is not a question about whether it's appropriate to refer to "God," etc., in the social context, nor for strategic advice.

I wonder if kind-heartedness or another term might better express what I intend?

I am writing a request to my manager and have drafted the last two sentences as follows:

I trust in god and his judgement, and I trust that virtue lies in his bestowal and his prevention, and that is what encouraged me to write to you. May it finds your support and leniency.

I am wondering if leniency is a good word to use in this context. My purpose is to politely and somewhat deferentially appeal to the recipient's kindness, compassion, moral sense, etc.

This is not a question about whether it's appropriate to refer to "God," etc., in the social context, nor for strategic advice.

I wonder if kind-heartedness or another term might better express what I intend?

I am writing an email to my manager, requesting to switch my department. In the closure, I am using the word "leniency" as a synonym for "empathy and acceptance".

I trust in god and his judgement, and I trust that virtue lies in his bestowal and his prevention, and that is what encouraged me to write to you. May it finds your support and leniency.

Is that a correct usage?

Can I use "kind-heartedness" instead?

[EDIT]

Thank you everyone for your replies, I got a lot of comments saying this is unprofessional, and I appreciate your input.
However, my question is about the English word "leniency", how to use it? and what are its alternatives?
It's not about how to write a professional email. The only reason I mentioned it is a business email is for context.

I am writing a request and have drafted the last two sentences as follows.

I trust in god and his judgement, and I trust that virtue lies in his bestowal and his prevention, and that is what encouraged me to write to you. May it finds your support and leniency.

I am wondering if leniency is a good word to use in this context. My purpose is to politely and somewhat deferentially appeal to the recipient's kindness, compassion, moral sense, etc.

This is not a question about whether it's appropriate to refer to "God," etc., in the social context, nor for strategic advice.

I wonder if kind-heartedness or another term might better express what I intend?

I am writing an email to my manager, requesting to switch my department. In the closure, I am using the word "leniency" as a synonym for "empathy and acceptance".

I trust in god and his judgement, and I trust that virtue lies in his bestowal and his prevention, and that is what encouraged me to write to you. May it finds your support and leniency.

Is that a correct usage?

Can I use "kind-heartedness" instead?

I am writing an email to my manager, requesting to switch my department. In the closure, I am using the word "leniency" as a synonym for "empathy and acceptance".

I trust in god and his judgement, and I trust that virtue lies in his bestowal and his prevention, and that is what encouraged me to write to you. May it finds your support and leniency.

Is that a correct usage?

Can I use "kind-heartedness" instead?

[EDIT]

Thank you everyone for your replies, I got a lot of comments saying this is unprofessional, and I appreciate your input.
However, my question is about the English word "leniency", how to use it? and what are its alternatives?
It's not about how to write a professional email. The only reason I mentioned it is a business email is for context.