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Aug 23, 2022 at 8:22 vote accept newbie forever
Aug 22, 2022 at 16:56 answer added David Siegel timeline score: 1
Aug 22, 2022 at 14:04 comment added Michael Harvey It sounds like you have better English than some of the people offering you advice.
Aug 22, 2022 at 14:01 history edited newbie forever CC BY-SA 4.0
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Aug 22, 2022 at 13:56 comment added newbie forever Thank you very much. In the first example, I was told better to use "conventional medical treatments" instead of "ones". In the second example, I was told better to repeat "number": the number of closures.
Aug 22, 2022 at 13:50 comment added stangdon Ones and that sound fine to me. Unfortunately, I feel like this question might be too general to be answered, if the person did not say why they thought these words didn't seem right.
Aug 22, 2022 at 13:47 history asked newbie forever CC BY-SA 4.0