Timeline for Is that idiomatic to say "I smell the old-school summer smell every time I go there"
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| Jul 16 at 2:51 | vote | accept | Kt Student | ||
| Jul 15 at 7:33 | comment | added | Seowjooheng Singapore | Thanks, @Michael Harvey for the good point and the phrase elegant variation. | |
| Jul 15 at 7:31 | history | edited | Seowjooheng Singapore | CC BY-SA 4.0 |
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| Jul 15 at 6:35 | comment | added | Michael Harvey | I think that if you try too hard to avoid repetition you can end up committing the awful sin of 'elegant variation'. In my opinion, 'I smell the old-school summer smell' is fine, and the positive feature of alliteration (all those Ss) outweighs any problem of repetition. | |
| Jul 15 at 5:32 | history | edited | Seowjooheng Singapore | CC BY-SA 4.0 |
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| Jul 15 at 5:21 | history | answered | Seowjooheng Singapore | CC BY-SA 4.0 |