Timeline for Confused in a very complex sentence
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| Dec 21, 2016 at 16:09 | comment | added | BLoB | Shouldn't it be "My dream is to see that one day..." Rather than "My dream is to see one day that..." ? | |
| Nov 19, 2014 at 20:55 | comment | added | Scott - Слава Україні | Actually, NASA isn’t a company at all; it’s a part of the U.S. Government. It would be better to say, “… used by a major organization, such as General Motors or NASA, …” or perhaps “… a major entity, …”. (But “General Motors” and “NASA” is a peculiar pairing.) Also, I believe “made and important contribution” is a typo for “made an important contribution”. | |
| Nov 19, 2014 at 14:02 | comment | added | oerkelens | @Murat: actually, I forgot to implement my own last point. In and to can both be used, by the way. In this case I do prefer to, so I have changed it accordingly. You can make a contribution in a field, e.g. make a contribution in the field of medical science. In this case, the sentence is long enough without such fillers :) | |
| Nov 19, 2014 at 14:00 | history | edited | oerkelens | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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| Nov 19, 2014 at 12:36 | vote | accept | Ali | ||
| Nov 19, 2014 at 12:18 | vote | accept | Ali | ||
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| Nov 19, 2014 at 12:08 | history | answered | oerkelens | CC BY-SA 3.0 |