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May 25, 2013 at 16:10 vote accept Soulz
Mar 30, 2013 at 17:34 comment added user485 I think its already implied by using "sprung up on her desk" that its in one action (can't imagine otherwise). So in my opinion the first phrase "In one leap" etc. is not necessary. "In one spring" is definitely repetative. I would put in a phrase that adds additional or contasting information, for example "From out of nowhere, she sprang up on her desk, nimble like a cat."
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