Timeline for May I say that reading web pages "faces some ... readability issues"?
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Sep 12, 2015 at 15:44 | history | edited | StoneyB on hiatus | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
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Aug 16, 2015 at 22:17 | comment | added | Wim Lewis | I think it would be slightly more natural to say that reading web pages has some issues, but faces or encounters some obstacles. My reasoning is that obstacles and issues are not quite parallel. Metaphorically, "obstacles" are outside of the act of reading but prevent the act from occurring, but "issues" are a part of the act of reading. A reader may face an issue or an obstacle, though. | |
Aug 16, 2015 at 21:42 | answer | added | Peter Kelley | timeline score: 1 | |
Aug 16, 2015 at 21:19 | comment | added | user3169 | Also, I would not put "obstacles and readability" together if readability is an obstacle. Perhaps "However, reading web pages faces some obstacles such as readability issues (and XXX)." | |
Aug 16, 2015 at 21:14 | comment | added | Cardinal | I think "turn out to be the ...:") | |
Aug 16, 2015 at 21:14 | comment | added | user3169 | Did you mean "turned into"? Or you could use become; "web pages have become the main source of information" | |
Aug 16, 2015 at 20:14 | comment | added | TimR | Reading...faces ...some...readability issues is an issue. "Turned to" should read "become". Simpler to say "Web pages have some readability issues". Writing faces readability issues, not reading. | |
Aug 16, 2015 at 20:12 | history | asked | Ahmad | CC BY-SA 3.0 |