- Is it the necessary before authorities? I have found the word authorities is used with and without it, so I am not sure.
- I want to drive the attention to the phrase: she can demonstrate the international academic.... However, if I place this sentence first and... by receiving education in countries known for .. after, I would have no opportunity to place a comma between both sentences, thus making the general phrase too long.
How to drive the attention to the phrase I am interested in without making it too long?
The authorities in our country want to hire people with experience and beyond the average qualities, as is the case with Hassim. On the one hand, she speaks English but also has working experience with the government, which are characteristics of high demand in our country with a deficient number of professionals having them. On the other hand, by receiving education in countries known for their high standards of investigation in food issues, she can demonstrate the international academic background required to take strategic decisions based on the latest statistical data.
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The authorities in our country want to hire people with experience and beyond the average qualities, as is the case with Hassim. On the one hand, she speaks English but also has working experience with the government, which are characteristics of high demand in our country with a deficient number of professionals having them. On the other hand, she can demonstrate the international academic background required to take strategic decisions based on the latest statistical data by receiving education in countries known for their high standards of investigation in food issues
