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I'm writting an email for a professor which who I'm interested in making a collaboration with and I want to say that I really liked the results of one of his work. However I don't want to sound fake as the results are not special nor extremely stellar, they are simply good.

How can I say it? The phrase I'm working on is this one: "While searching for possible contacts, I came across your personal page and was able to read some of your works regarding the implementation of computational tools in undergraduate curriculum and was XXXXXX by the results."

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"I was very interested in the results" sounds natural. Keen, but not over the top.

Please consider making it two sentences:

While searching for possible contacts I came across your personal page and read some of your work/writing on the implementation of computational tools in the undergraduate curriculum. I was very interested in the results.

works is fine if you read several essays or treatises. Otherwise use work if it was e.g. a research paper, or writing if not.

If it is only one curriculum say "in the undergraduate curriculum," otherwise say "in undergraduate curricula."

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