In the previous question I was told that these sentences are clumsy and their meanings are confusing:
Being taken to the hospital, he survived.
Being beaten by the snow, he died.
Can I convert these sentence into meaningfull sentences as follows:
- Being taken to the hospital, he died.
(To mean: while he was being taken to the hospital, he died)
- Being beaten by mother to her son, the father arrived.
(To mean: While the son was being beaten by his mother, the father arrived)
Do I have to use "while" in front of "being+past participle in above sentences to imply those intended meanings?