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Kindly let me know if having a UK bank account is necessary, as unfortunately I have not applied for bank account yet.

What do you reword it to be more elegant and polite?

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What you have is great, you just need the indefinite article on the second mention of the bank account:

Kindly let me know if having a UK bank account is necessary, as unfortunately I have not applied for [a] bank account yet.

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