I have following 2 statements.
- The convergences of topological relations of adjacent segments can be derived from graphs.
- The convergences allows reconstruction of object geometries with preserved topology.
I want to combine them to make a single sentence. I am struggling the placement to be linked this second sentence. I did as follows.
try1: The convergences of topological relations of adjacent segments can be derived from graphs which allows reconstruction of object geometries with preserved topology.
But, I feel, this should be like
try2:The convergences of topological relations of adjacent segments, which allows reconstruction of object geometries with preserved topology can be derived from graphs.
Do you think that I placed the 2nd sentence correctly in try2? instead of adjacent segments can I use segment adjacencies?
Overall, what is good scientific writing style?