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I wrote the following sentences:

  1. He drives not so much quickly as recklessly.
  2. He does not drive so much quickly as recklessly.
  3. He does not drive quickly so much as recklessly.

Which one sounds best to you? I would be grateful for any comments.

  • I think the first sounds a lot better. Best to keep the "not" with the "so much", and not insert a verb between them. The second and third sentences are not so much ungrammatical as they are awkward. – J.R. Dec 30 '16 at 10:22
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Here is an alternate opinion for you that you can consider.

He drives not so much fast, as he drives reckless. Or He drives not as much fast as reckless. He drives quickly, not as much as recklessly.

Though it is not an absolute rule, I think what is affecting me is that frequently the -ly adverb follows the verb and not a quantifier so for me it is just awkward. However, others feel differently than I do.

When I think of driving quickly, I think of someone getting into a care and putting it into motion as soon as possible, which could be a slow motion. Quickly usually implies doing something in a short time.

I ate quickly, so I could leave for the movies. I am not sure that driving quickly is related to being reckless. Driving fast may or may not be wreckless.

  • To drive fast, fast is an adverb. To drive recklessly, adverb. – Lambie Jan 11 at 0:32
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As a native BrE speaker I would never say 1 or 2. They would sound strange to me if I heard anyone say them. 3 sounds fine to me, and I would insert a comma if I were writing it:

He does not drive quickly, so much as recklessly.

I couldn't disagree more with J.R.'s comment on the OP!

  • I agree with this completely. And I am an AmE speaker. So 3 is fine. – Lambie Jan 11 at 0:32
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Short Answer: 1

Long Answer: But I would write it as, "It's not so much that he drives quickly as it is that he drives recklessly."

  • There may be a place for it, but I don't think a learner should assume that your wordier version is always the better one. – J.R. Dec 30 '16 at 10:26
  • @J.R. I hadn't made that assumption myself. Expert opinions these may be, they are still only opinions after all, no? – Teacher KSHuang Dec 30 '16 at 10:51
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    Generally speaking and in an ideal sense, SE strives to get answers, not opinions. Moreover, you may not have made that assumption, but it's not hard to imagine a learner reading your answer and jumping to that conclusion – especially in your answer's current terse form. – J.R. Dec 30 '16 at 10:57
  • @J.R. I think you should give us learners more credit than that. – Teacher KSHuang Dec 30 '16 at 11:17
  • I think your answer could be misleading; it makes it sound like your wordier version is superior to the O.P.'s short one. All I did was leave a clarifying comment. I'm not trying to discredit any learner. – J.R. Dec 30 '16 at 14:29

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