I have a question about a possible poor wording in the following:
Newly-inaugurated President Donald Trump and wife Melania Trump ended a busy Inauguration Day with a visit to three balls in Washington.
The Liberty Ball and Freedom Ball both took place at the Washington Convention Center. The Trumps took the stage first at the Liberty Ball shortly after 9:30 p.m.
Their first dance was to musicians performing the Frank Sinatra song "My Way."
Is the bold part poorly written? Would a rewrite like this:
Their first dance was to the Frank Sinatra song "My Way."
be better, since usually people dance to a song, and people do not dance to musicians performing a song?