I was watching comedy series, Man Seeking Woman.

A group of people was discussing what to text a girl. I mean, they were discussing how to make good texts for the girl.

Josh: Tell you what. I'm gonna start it off. "Hey, it's Josh."
General: See? Already, you've failed. You've got a comma after your "hey" and a period after "Josh." What's next, semicolons and footnotes?
Josh: Okay, fine, no... No punctuation.

Here is a video clip for the scene at 1:00.

I don't understand why General said you've failed. What's the point? I cannot find either gag point and grammar point.

  • Too smart? You can be made fun of. Too silly? You can be made fun of. Too neat? You can be made fun of. Too lame? You can be made fun of. Actually, if someone wants to make fun of something or someone, they sure can. Punctuating sentences properly in texting surely can be made of as well. – Damkerng T. Mar 9 '17 at 12:31
  • @DamkerngT. I'm so sorry but what are you saying? I couldn't understand. – Ting Choe Mar 9 '17 at 14:25
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    What I meant was, I think the scriptwriter made fun of a certain kind of man who's seeking a woman. In our case, it's a man who pays attention to detail, who types up everything so perfectly, even in texting. The general is used as a character who's pointing out that by doing so, he's failed his mission (I guess the mission is seeking a woman). This point may or may not be true in real life, though. It's just a comedy, and the scriptwriter just used these characters as a device to get us laugh. That's all. – Damkerng T. Mar 9 '17 at 14:43

Here it means that he is obviously not focused on the task at hand because he still has time to think of punctuation. On the other hand it's informally accepted to omit proper punctuation from SMS.

Edit: Compare that omission with Headlinese

  • Ah. That's why a person said "Time is critical!" So is General scolding Josh to focus on contents of the text rather than punctuation? – Ting Choe Mar 9 '17 at 12:01
  • Actually, adding punctuation doesn't spend much time. So exaggerating is a gag point? – Ting Choe Mar 9 '17 at 12:07
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    @TINGCHOE Sure, it is. Especially in context of stereotypically brisk and harsh army style. – Hector von Mar 9 '17 at 14:17

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