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Could someone help me revise this sentence? Does this sentence make sense to you guys?

"The more the perception of family support, the more Mandarin favorable the language use policy at home, and/or the more years of family support for formal CHL, the higher the students’ CHL proficiency tends to be."

PS: CHL here stands for Chinese Heritage Language

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Are you trying to say

The more family support at home, the more Mandarin favorable the language policy is.

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The more the years of family support for formal CHL, the higher/(more) the student's CHL proficiency tends to be.

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  • Ahh, Peter! Hi there!!
    – Iris Gao
    Apr 29, 2017 at 20:05
  • Hiya, I modified your sentences
    – Peter
    Apr 29, 2017 at 20:09
  • Really nice to hear from you again~~
    – Iris Gao
    Apr 30, 2017 at 2:30
  • Hope all is well with you!
    – Peter
    May 1, 2017 at 20:09

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