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"Sailing to the tune of our fate"

  • The 'to' doesn't sound right, what might be its replacement?
  • Can any other world replace the word tune in the sentence?
  • What is your phrase supposed to mean? What is tune of our fate? – Peter May 15 '17 at 4:27
  • The rhythm, maybe. Meaning, we are sailing through this life, as it's destined to be. Moving according to its tune. @Peter – Aqib May 15 '17 at 4:38
  • The "to" is OK. For example "marching to the beat of a different drum". You could use "tune" or "rhythm" or another synonym. It depends on what feeling you are trying to convey. – user3169 May 15 '17 at 4:44
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Sailing to the tune of our fate.

has the feeling the tune is driving/pushing the sailing, as in

Dancing to the EDM beat.

Sailing with the tune of our fate.
Sailing by the tune of our fate.

both of these pose the tune as an accompaniment for the sailing.

Sailing from the tune of our fate.

might have the meaning that one's fate was avoided and escaped.

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