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Does this make sense?

Other achievements he attained...

Or is it "obtained"?

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If you must use the noun "achievement" (rather than the verb "achieve") and find yourself in need of a verb to go with it, there are possibilities but all of them sound a little bit awkward.

Perform, win, score or gain are the sorts of things I have in mind.

e.g. He performed the remarkable achievement of three birdies in a row.

But it would be less wordy to say He achieved three birdies in a row.

As someone has noted achieve and achievement are already strong words.

Of course achievement works well with the verb to be, as in To have climbed Everest is a stunning achievement.

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    You could also use the possessive - "His other achievements include..." – ColleenV parted ways Jun 4 '17 at 12:48

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