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I'm writing a job recommendation letter for a friend of mine. There's a personal part about our friendship. I would like to know what could be improved. We're not native english speakers and I don't know if this stack exchange is suited for this. Here's the paragraph:

Me and John Doe are friends for more than 10 years. We lived a lot of life experiences together... We already were coworkers, friends of fun, of trouble, of adventures and trip partners. I really trust him. John likes to taste new foods, always open to meet new friends and new places, his desire to discover this world its a nice thing to see. He likes to walk, to drive and loves the sunshine. John is very practical, determined and positive person. These were the first 10 years of friendship... And i know we will have a lot of 10 more.

closed as off-topic by Nathan Tuggy, user3169, ColleenV Aug 9 '17 at 19:40

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  • Welcome to ELL! We can help with specific questions about English. If you edit your question to focus on one sentence or phrase that you are worried about and explain why you think it might not be correct, we may be able to reopen your question. – ColleenV Aug 9 '17 at 19:42
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Without trying to completely rewrite your tribute, I would make some grammatical and other changes (italicised) so it reads like this :

John Doe and I have been friends for more than 10 years. We have shared a lot of life experiences together... We were already coworkers, friends in fun times, in trouble, on adventures and trips. I really trust him. John likes to taste new foods, is always open to making new friends and visiting new places. His desire to explore this world is a nice thing to see. He likes to walk, to drive and loves the sunshine. John is a very practical, determined and positive person. These were the first 10 years of friendship... And I know we will have many more.

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