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I am reading Jonathan Franzen's The Corrections, and I came across this sentence:

He'd had his nap and there would be no local news until five o'clock.

Why did Franzen choose to write the sentence using the past perfect instead of the simple past? My understanding of past perfect is that it is only used to denote an event in the past that occurred before another event. Should I consider the "local news until five o'clock" as that latter event?

I know that the past perfect subjunctive of "have" is "had had," but I do not believe that he is conveying that mood.

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You need the larger context:

Three in the afternoon was a time of danger in these gerontocratic suburbs of St. Jude. Alfred had awakened in the great blue chair in which he'd been sleeping since lunch. He'd had his nap and there would be no local news until five o'clock. Two empty hours were a sinus in which infections bred.

Reference Time for this past perfect is introduced at the beginning of the paragraph: three in the afternoon. At some time before that Alfred had awakened; he had had his nap, so now he had no mindless activity left to occupy the two empty hours between Reference Time, three o'clock, and the next mindless activity, the local news, at five o'clock.

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  • StoneyB, thank you for the response. Before posting the question, I debated on whether I should add the sentences you added for me. I didn't think they had anything to do with the sentence in question; clearly, I was wrong! This might sound silly, but I was not aware sentences could affect each other like that. Thank you for your valuable insight.
    – TKallday
    Commented Aug 20, 2017 at 8:48
  • @stoneyB So this means that the sentence can't be judged as grammatically correct or incorrect out of the larger context. But what if the sentence were written as the OP suggested it could be: "He had his nap and there would be no local news until five o'clock." Can that sentence be judged grammatically correct or incorrect without context? Or something like "He ate his pie and will go to the circus at five o'clock."
    – Zan700
    Commented Aug 20, 2017 at 16:40
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I personally do not think it makes sense without the wider context. The narrative is in the past, but the nap was at earlier time than the wider context so the 'had had' shows that at that time in the past the nap had already happened and finished.

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