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Comparing the two sentences:

This can help you in learning English.

vs

This can help you to learn English.

Or in scientific writing

The system process A to obtain B containing C.

vs

This system process A to obtain B that contains C.

My understanding is that both first version (with gerund) are preferred. Is it because the sentence already containing a verb, therefore gerund form is preferred to prevent two verbs in one sentence together, or is there other rule that helps to identify this? Are there any exceptions?

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    I would go for this can help you learn English.
    – Maulik V
    Dec 5, 2013 at 13:27
  • Any particular reason ?
    – drhanlau
    Dec 5, 2013 at 13:29
  • I found myself having a tendency to avoid verb-ing in both of your examples too, but I couldn't tell why. Then I found this interesting link: writers.stackexchange.com/questions/2428/… Dec 5, 2013 at 13:49

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In your first example, while I'd prefer with for the preposition, they are both acceptable, and are both interchangeable. Gerunds and infinitives generally function similarly, although sometimes changes in syntax are required. The one you chose will be based on which best fits into the rhythm or voice of your writing.

The second set of examples are a bit more problematic. First of all, unless I'm misunderstanding, the verb should be processes.

The system process processes A [in order] to obtain B, containing C.

The system process processes A [in order] to obtain B, which contains C.

The problem here is that you have a restrictive clause--i.e. one that is needed to modify the word it identifies, which in this case is B--so the appropriate relative pronoun is which, not that. Always use which for restrictive clauses and that for non-restrictive clauses.

Also, in the first of these, containing C is a participial phrase in the present tense. It's also modifying B.

In both cases you need a comma after obtain B, and [result] B is being modified by each.

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  • The system process A to obtain B that contains C might not mean what you understood. I am a used to read and write mathematics and physics, and in my opinion that statement means that A is a system process, whose objetive is to obtain B, and the latter contains C.
    – Albert
    Mar 24 at 11:18

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