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The doll would be completely bare if not for her hair---copper red as Tsukiko's dyed one---draping her nippleless breasts.

Is one the correct choice here? For some reason, it feels strange to me. But maybe it's just me.

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I'm guessing one refers to Tsukiko's dyed hair, but initially I was confused because I assumed one refered to Tsukiko's dyed doll. Although "hair" is (technically) a singular noun, we don't use the pronoun one as a substitute for "hair". "It" is fine, but not "one".

The point of the sentence seems to be to compare the doll's hair to Tsukiko's hair, in which case it might have been better to repeat the noun:

The doll would be completely bare if not for her hair -- the same copper red as Tsukiko's dyed hair -- draping her nippleless breasts.

As a point of style, I don't like the word "dyed" here. It may be accurate that her hair is not naturally that color, but it breaks the flow of the sentence. I would instead say:

The doll would be completely bare if not for her hair -- copper red like Tsukiko's -- draping her nippleless breasts.

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