I've been working on my accent for a while and I feel like there's a lot of things that I need to work on but I still don't know which.
The accent that I am aiming for is general American. So, can anyone listen to this 30-second audio and tell me what letters/sounds or maybe things that I need to work on/fix to sound like a native American speaker: https://www.speakpipe.com/voice-recorder/msg/cbgqsbh15j4gzrm2
I read the following paragraph:
"A publisher in New York asked me to write down what I know about the Greek gods, and I was like, “Can we do this anonymously? Because I don’t need the Olympians mad at me again.” But if it helps you to know your Greek gods, and survive an encounter with them if they ever show up in your face, then I guess writing all this down will be my good deed for the week. If you don’t know me, my name is Percy Jackson. I’m a modern-day demigod—a half-god, half-mortal son of Poseidon"