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Two years ago I ate ice-cream every day. I was doing this/had been doing this for six months. That's why I was weighing much more during that time.

Are the tenses used here correct? If yes/no, why? :D Thank you ;)

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I would personally make some changes in your statement, firstly:

Two years ago I would eat ice-cream every day

Since you added an adverbial phrase of time (every day), "would", which can also be used to state something that used to happen quite often in the past, sounds better.

I had been doing this for six months

Is correct since the action of eating ice cream (which is represented by this) occurred first than the count.

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  • Could I also say something like "Two years ago, I had been eating ice-cream for six months?" – Faust1808 Oct 10 '17 at 15:29
  • I wouldn't say that it sounds correct. You stated two adverbial phrases of time, but stating two different occasions: Two years ago (a specific period of time) + for six months (an ongoing period of time), so it kinda doesn't make sense at all. the whole sentence's meaning probably doesn't imply what you may have intended to say; it implies that the act of eating ice-cream for six months occurred before two years ago because the past perfect implies an action that happened before another past action stated in the same sentence. – Davyd Oct 10 '17 at 16:48
  • What I'm mainly trying to convey is that when you use such an adverbial phrase as "two years ago", the hearer or reader expects to hear/read an action which occurred in a specific period of time, in that case: two years ago. On the other hand, when you write/say "for", the hearer/reader expects to hear/read something that was ongoing for a certain period of time, for example: I had worked as a chief for two years when I was hired by that company Working as a chief was an ongoing action for two years This might work: Two years ago, I worked as a chief for two years – Davyd Oct 10 '17 at 16:53

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