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In an exercise book for college students, the teacher asked the students to combine the following sentence using a relative pronoun:
Shakespeare was a famous writer. He wrote great plays.
The teacher's answer was as follows:
Shakespeare was a famous writer who wrote great plays.
lsn't it better to combine the sentence as follows?
Shakespeare, who wrote great plays, was a famous writer.
I think both sentences are technically acceptable, but people will no doubt have different opinions about which sentence is correct.
I think that if the reader doesn't know who or what Shakespeare is then your teacher's first choice is best because the reader will probably want to know that Shakespeare was a writer (first).
The clause then goes on to add more information i.e. it functions as an adjective clause which is what a relative clause is.
