In my technical paper, I have written as follows.
The strategy is used to fix outer-boundaries is useful for maintaining symmetries and alignments of boundaries.
But, I have been asked to reformulated this sentence. I am confused now what is the wrong with this... Doesn't this give a clear literacy?
So, If I write like this
The strategy used to fix outer-boundaries is useful for maintaining gutter symmetries and as well as alignments of adjacent boundaries.
However, please suggest your way because I want to learn how this can be improved.