I'm a Ph.D student, my adviser always asks me to add more things to my paper. So yesterday, when I argued with him, I was saying "You know, I just think adding too much information can actually make our main point fading out". My adviser said, "what do you mean it is fading out? Do you mean it is too divergent?"
In fact, all I want to say is "Adding too much information makes your main point less standing out", what is the good phrase for that?
Also, is it a correct grammar --- "make it less standing out"?