Is this sentence correct when I am narrating a past event using the present tense (historical present)
"I remember the first time I spoke to a hot girl (English native speaker), it was completely intimidating, my mind was kinda feeling numb, and while she was talking, I was concurrently self-talking saying 'is this really happening? Is this really happening?!''
My introductory clause is in present tense (I remember the first time), then followed by past tenses as I go on storytelling. Did I do correctly?