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If we see the language in its natural pace and flow which of the following sound better? May God bestow sincerity upon me! or May God make me become sincere! or May I become sincere!

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    To bestow sincerity treats sincerity as though it were a gift, something that can be given. That would not be an invalid linguistic usage, but not everyone considers sincerity to be a gift let alone a divine gift; many regard it as a character trait. – Tᴚoɯɐuo Apr 28 '18 at 11:55
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Your attempts to express a fervent wish differ in their degree of formality. bestow...upon is more formal than make me.

If you're aiming for a "natural" expression, make me become sincere should be make me sincere.

May God make me sincere!

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May God grant me sincerity!

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