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In the bolded sentence, it looks that something is wrong:

Though the purpose of this book as a whole is to look at what could be considered appropriate activity in regard to a cultural site, it is necessary here to look at what might or might not be appropriate commercial activity for the site in question. The particular concerns of religious sites have been referred to already. In general, the ideal is that any commercial activity should be that which is most suitable simultaneously to meet the needs of a site, its presenter and its audience. Mismatches, where activity is inappropriate, spoiling the atmosphere of a place, simply ‘grate’. (Boniface, 1995, p. 100)

Is it grammatical? What does this sentence mean? would you paraphrase it? Shouldn't there be an is before simply?


Reference:

Boniface, P. (1995). Managing quality cultural tourism: Routledge.

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    simply grating. An activity grates on one's nerves. It is, therefore, a grating activity. That book could be a translation. You need the gerund there: grating. – Lambie May 29 '18 at 13:14
  • The sentence actually works. However, it, and the entire paragraph, is very awkward. – Jason Bassford May 29 '18 at 22:27
  • @JasonBassford In what respect are they awkward? – Juya May 30 '18 at 11:49
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    There is an excessive use of verbiage, as well as some repetition. By the time you've finished the first sentence (for instance) you've kind of forgotten what the point of it is. The whole paragraph could be expressed as something short and simple: "This book has discussed some appropriate activity on cultural sites. Here, it focuses on commercial activity. As with religious sites, commercial activity should meet the needs of all site users. When it doesn't, it can seem out of place." – Jason Bassford May 30 '18 at 15:54
  • @JasonBassford Great edition! I just think this is more accurate: "... commercial activity should meet the needs of the site itself and all its users." – Juya May 31 '18 at 11:53
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The verb here is (probably) 'grate'. See the first definition at dictionary.com:

'to have an irritating or unpleasant effect'.

  • Yes, it could be. Cambridge Dictionary: grate verb (ANNOY) ​ [ I ] When a noise or behaviour grates, it annoys you: After a while her voice really started to grate on me. It's the way she's always talking about herself - it just grates on me. – Juya May 29 '18 at 11:36
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    @Juya I was just slightly unsure about the inverted commas. I'm not sure I can agree with Learnerer below. It seems more likely to me either that the word 'grate' has been used before by someone else (probably mentioned above), and the quotation marks remind you of this, or that the writer considers 'grate' to be a non-standard or slightly inappropriate word in the context (i.e. for the register), and thus wishes to excuse its use. – Σωκράτης May 29 '18 at 19:20
  • Good point! It would be fruitful that you comment under his answer so that he has the opportunity to reflect on it and probably reply. – Juya May 29 '18 at 21:57
  • Hi. Sorry, I just noticed the comment. I'm not really one for grammar, nor am I a language pro, but I do know that direct-reporting of others is surrounded with double quotes, not single. What I tried to say in my answer below is that the speaker/writer conveyed the meaning of the word by actually performing/doing it; a case unique in that the verb word itself is actually a realization of its meaning.. . – Learnerer Jul 7 at 11:55
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The verb here is grate. The use of single quotations is to signify the utterance of the word rather than use the word for what it means, which in this case then happens to manifest its intended meaning:

grate: make an unpleasant rasping sound

  • See my comment on my answer for alternative reasons for the inverted commas. – Σωκράτης May 30 '18 at 7:53

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