I am trying to express an idea but I am not sure it is proper:
I'm writing a letter to someone explaining a situation, but I need to be sure the person will understand.
My sentence is the following:
Mr.V, our yoga teacher, offers the opportunity to non-experienced teachers from Europe, to organize outdoor multiple yoga courses to celebrate summer.
Is this correct? Does it sound natural? Or do I have to write way like this:
Mr V, our yoga teacher, offers to non-experienced teachers from Europe the opportunity to organize (...).
Non-experienced teachers from Europe are given the opportunity by Mr V, our yoga teacher, to organize an outdoor multiple yoga course
I have the feeling that English speakers won't understand... Can you?