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In my office bio-data form I added three more points. I requested:

"Please incorporate these points and make these points effective."

"Incorporate" or "subsume"? Which one is correct? I also made a request to make these points effective which will be parts of the bio-data form. Does the last request make any sense? As per New oxford advanced learners dictionary, Incorporate means to include something that it forms a part of something examples [1} many of your suggestions have been incorporated.[2] the new car design incorporates all the latest safety features [3]we have incorporated all the latest safety features into the design.And subsume means to include something in a particular group and not consider it separately example[1]all these different ideas can be subsumed under just two broad categories. As per compact oxford dictionary and thesaurus Incorporate means include some thing as part of a whole [ synonyms- absorb,include,blend] But subsume means[usually passive] to include something in a particular group and not consider it separately.But subsume means include or absorb something in something else. example [1] GST subsumes central excise ,customs and octroi duties.I think In subsume separate identity of what is subsumed is not lost and can be separately shown when required .So my request "please incorporate" was wrong.the request should be"please subsume".

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    Please edit to format your question. Ill-punctuated text blocks are difficult to read. – Eddie Kal Nov 14 '18 at 19:22
  • @EddieKal I have given the dictionary meanings [1] NEW oxford advanced learners dictionary [2] Compact oxford dictionary and thesaurus.All meanings dictionary wise user 26375 – user26375 Nov 15 '18 at 2:24
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I would not use the word subsume. It's not a common word and it might even confuse whoever you're asking.

You could just use the word add:

"Please add these points to my bio. Thanks."

As for the part where you say, "Please make these points effective," I find that confusing. It's almost like you think that the wording is not very good and you're asking for the wording to be changed before the points get added. But it's hard to know for sure without knowing what software system you use to track performance data, and what technical terms people use when talking about submitting and revising the data.

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