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I want to express an increase in annual sales of my company from 2013 to 2018. I have written the following sentence. I don't know why, but I feel that it's somehow strange, isn't it? If so, any suggestion.

I am proud to announce that the annual sales volume of my company in the 2018 financial year is(or has become) seven times(or sevenfold) as high as(or higher than) that in 2013.

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You may rephrase as follows:

I am proud to announce that the sales volume of my company in financial year 2018 is seven times as much as that in 2013.

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    A high sales volume is correct, so a comparative form works - higher, as high as. I'd prefer higher than in the OP's original. It's also 2019, so, 2018 "was" – Matt Jan 1 at 21:45
  • A company is likely to simplify the statement to something like: sales in 2018 showed a 700% improvement on 2013 or ....were seven times greater than in 2013. – Ronald Sole Jan 1 at 22:40

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