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..... I agree with the statement that Boland's reflective insights are expressed through her precise use of language. We see this statement to be true in 'Child of Our Time'.....

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  • It makes sense, but is verbose. – Jeff Morrow Jan 3 at 20:34
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It's not "wrong" but there are better options

I think it's grammatically correct but it is a bit unnaturally phrased. You might try one of these instead:

This is true in Child of Our Time.

We see this in Child of Our Time.

We see an example of this in Child of Our Time. (or We see examples of this ...)

  • thank you very much,I was having trouble formulating a proper conclusion – eliza eglite Jan 3 at 20:31

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