I stumbled across a sentence recently

I saw a baby bus while its proud mother showed it the way

I feel like while should be replaced with as, or saw with watched. Can anyone tell me if this sentence is correct as is and why or why not?

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    "A baby bus"? Are you sure that was the sentence? Also can you try to explain what you want the sentence to mean? – Laurel Jan 10 at 2:02
  • Lol, yes I'm sure that was the sentence. As for what I want it to mean, it's not my sentence! – Myk Jan 10 at 23:50
  • OK but where did you see this? – Laurel Jan 10 at 23:53
  • It was a meme that my friend showed me. – Myk Jan 10 at 23:53
  • Can you post or link to the meme? – Laurel Jan 10 at 23:54

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