How do I write the following using reported speech?

Enviamos las solicitudes de las becas para que la dirección de becas reconsiderara los requerimientos pero el director de becas rechazo las solicitudes.

I wrote it as

He also said that they had sent the scholarship application so that scholarship direction will reconsider the requirements but the coordinator of federal scholarships didn't accept the requests.

Is this correct?

  • I forgot to mention that you should edit your post to make improvements. Also, I would say that you can’t really expect anyone to check the translation (as that’s not really what we do here) but you can expect help with a specific issue you have with your English writing. – Em. Feb 8 at 2:08

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