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I was trying to write something, but then it occurred to me it doesn't sound quite right.

Here is the blueprint of the product I want to have made. Can you make it for me?

It doesn't sound quite idiomatic, so I was wondering if it was correct. Also, is the alternate version any better or equally wrong?

Here is the blueprint of the product I want to be made. Can you make it for me?

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Want to be made, in the passive voice, would be heard as "wishful thinking". If you have an actual product you are paying someone to make, the first example is correct, idiomatic English.

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