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  1. Managers must make changes that are consistent with their firm's structure.

  2. Managers must make changes in their strategies.

My objective is to make a simple sentence using the sentences 1&2.

Can I rewrite the sentences in this way?

A. In their strategies, managers must make changes that are consistent with their firm's structure.

B. Managers must make changes in their strategies, that are consistent with their firm's structure.

Are there other ways to rewrite the sentence? Thanks in advance.

  • It is a good idea to run your writing through a spell checker to catch the typos, like "ovjective" – James K Mar 10 at 16:01
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Your structure for B is correct. You can further simplify B to "Managers must make changes in their strategies consistent with their firm's structure."

A is incorrect. Your wording does not establish that the structure of the firm is what the manager must change.

You can also word this as: "Changes in managerial strategy must be consistent with firm structure."

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