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Is this sentence grammatically and stylistically correct?

They mightn't experience neither obsession nor attraction but real love.

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    Yes, but you shouldn't use 'might not' with 'neither ... nor' because that's a double negative. "They might experience neither obsession nor attraction but real love' would be correct. – BoldBen Apr 8 '19 at 8:27
  • @BoldBen Sadly, perhaps they didn't experience real love, and the tortured sentence expresses their feeling. – Lawrence Apr 8 '19 at 8:32
  • And adding to the first comment, drop the article—it's just real love, not the real love. – Jason Bassford Supports Monica Apr 9 '19 at 2:20
  • What's the context? Based on just what you wrote here it could perhaps be re-written to: "They might not experience obsession, nor attraction -- but real love". – seventyeightist Apr 9 '19 at 20:46
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I would suggest the sentence to be rewritten without the double negative:

They might experience neither obsession nor attraction but real love.

You could even split it into two sentences, especially for spoken conversation:

What they might experience is neither obsession nor attraction. It is real love.

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