Is it better to put:
Snow white was so pretty with her blood-red lips, her fair skin and her black hair.
or
Snow White was so pretty with her blood-red lips, fair skin and black hair.
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Snow white was so pretty with her blood-red lips, her fair skin and her black hair.
or
Snow White was so pretty with her blood-red lips, fair skin and black hair.
Is it better to put:
It's not better. It's also not worse.
You can use either interchangeably. The repetition is unnecessary- so most people would probably opt for the shorter version. Both are technically correct.