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I saw the following sentence at the start of an e-mail. While it is grammatical, I'd like know if it is natural.

Dear Mr. Smith:

The reason I'm writing this e-mail is to inform you of a change to our August schedule.

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  • I've seen similar uses, and it does not strike me as unnatural.
    – Davo
    Jul 11, 2019 at 20:27
  • At the start of an email?
    – Apollyon
    Jul 12, 2019 at 1:04

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For a formal letter, you would normally begin this way:

I write to inform you of a change to our August schedule.

An email is really no different - although many people adopt a more informal approach to sending emails, you have begun with the proper address "Dear Mr Smith", so it seems that you should follow the conventions of a letter.

In informal correspondence people tend to "get to the point". "The reason I am writing this email" is pretty superfluous - of course it's an email, it came into my inbox.

Informally, you are more likely to see:

Just letting you know about a change to our August schedule.

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  • Thank you for your reply. Is there anything wrong with "I am writing to inform you of a change to our August schedule," using the present progressive instead of the simple present?
    – Apollyon
    Jul 11, 2019 at 9:44
  • @Apollyon that's fine too, and a good compromise!
    – Astralbee
    Jul 11, 2019 at 9:45

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