Do I need to use 'the' instead of 'a' here? Are the punctuation marks correct?
She gave him a reason. A reason, that was sufficient to burst a passion inside him so that he could reveal all his feelings.
I was searching for some essay conclusions examples on the Internet and found the following:
My attitudes have greatly shaped after this study. I have realized the ways meat impact our life and health. Meatless meals might improve the health conditions of patients suffering from various disorders, and the observed study proves it.
The source: https://pro-essay-writer.com/blog/essay-conclusion-examples
I wanted to use the first phrase in my own essay. I wonder if it is correct or not. Personally, I find it a bit weird. But maybe it is not so?