the conveying to an employee of unconditional entitlement to a share in a pension fund
To me the sentence are just different confusing components:
to an employee;
of unconditional entitlement;
to a share;
in a pension fund.
in a pension fund which subject it describes?
entitlement or employee``` ?
The same question for
to a share : what to a share? Does it describe the conveying to a share or the employee to a share?
I can understand easy-structured sentence but this one has so many parallel combinations of prep. and noun.
After reading it repeatedly, I think a better grouping would be like this:
the conveying to an employee and
unconditional entitlement to a share in a pension fund
Hope my question makes sense y'all. ..
Thank you for helping out.